Litteratur: Forsøk på dikt, hva synes dere?

[RushOfBlood]

Dette var et forsøk på å være morsom. Det handler om en kammerat av meg, ble skrevet på skolen idag. Han skulle skrive noe om meg også, men tror ikke han visste hva han skulle skrive.

 

Noen tanker om det?

 

 

 

"Story of a boy"

 

 

This is a story of a boy.

Telling people he is a boy toy.

He likes to play with his little friend

together with his giant hand.

 

He has fetishes never seen before

jerking off to stuff unknown.

Unreal porn is what it is,

so how can you stop someone

who likes that shit?

 

They say he "plays" with goats

a secret that should not be told.

Discreet I tell you this

because wrong is what it is.

This is something I can't explain,

stuff like this is to insane.

 

I have one more thing to tell.

About the way his eyes moves

when she bends.

He is a dirty boy I know,

but who can control what

makes that little man grow?